Saved, by Annie B. SnowRaven
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My head down, my eyes closed
My heart started to hurt
Blood is running down my nose
And falling right on my shirt
I heard a glass brake
Then a ding of a bell
I was silent and confused
To heaven or hell?
I thought I was dying
As I painfully hit the ground
Seeing the grim reaper right beside me
Delighted to strike me down
Then I heard a voice
A voice I’ve never heard before
I was saved. I was rescued
I suffer no more
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Posted: 2008-06-01 06:42:02 UTC |
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2008-06-03 21:52:27 | MorbidMaiden |
Wow! Fantastically written as always. I'd love to know the story behind this one...
xxx |
2008-06-04 21:21:53 | Annie B. SnowRaven |
Well... It wasn't much of a story but a feeling. I felt lonely at that time and remembered what could possibly take me out of my misery. |
2008-06-09 01:07:23 | ~Stay_Beautiful~20104 |
WOW this is an amazing poem!! You are incredibly talented and I admire how well you describe things!! |