Little Sister

By ray! •
By ray! •
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very good. deep and thought provoking.
i dont know if i like this.. i have a feeling its about abuse.. im right, right? i thinkits so very well written in fact i do love it. im sorry if its true
Wow! This is a very strong poem! I love how the story is hidden in it! It's so sad that this can be a reality. Kind of eye-opening... I'm sure many can relate to the emotion behind it, simply because of the title! Great poem!
Oh,my,what a poem,sad but awesome,it brought tears to my eyes.
very powerful write...thank you for sharing.
Dayum awesome poem! I hae a little sis hehe It made my eyes watery on the 2nd paragraph lol. Gosh I'm so sentimental but I like it!!! but at the end, does it mean that he beat her up? didn't really get it, you can send me a comment back explaining it to me if you have time =)! good either way.