...so gone

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By Brittany •

I wish you would come out, Tell me the things you want to tell me, Ask me the questions you want to ask me, You know im here always listening, never criticizing, never judging. The thing is I feel the same way as you do, Wanting to come out, Tell you things i have to say to you, Ask you the questions to hear the answers that Im dieing to hear. Though I dont know if you are always listening, If your criticizing or judging. Give me that feeling that you are always there, Always listening. Beacuse right now, I feel so gone...

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April 6, 2005 04:08Mysti

omg can i tell you how much i love this may i write it down and give it to Eric to let him know how i feel? i promise i'll say you wrote it. ^.^

March 29, 2007 00:11Sithlim

SO often we think its we who is givng even though we are infact demanding... so often we think that ours is true love as it involves only giving,,.. and so often ,, My friend I am sorry to say we are wrong..\you read your poem.. its al there..

February 27, 2009 17:14Angel of Music

This is beautifully written. I loved it.

May 5, 2009 01:37Janae_WITH pasion

good