TRUE VALUE

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By !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

As the candle light flickers upon your lovely Radiant smile I've caught a glimpse of something I can't forget Even with the strongest denial. The sense of such great love confused with A pinch of hate. For the past had seemed to darken your eyes Like an impenetrable stain. And this spot of unbridled fate has broken All hope with such merciless pain But looking deeper within I've seen past this Thick wall of rain And I've been caught up in something more than Any man could ask for. A passionate soul of diligent desire that has Consumed my thoughts like wild fire! So even though the beauty of this temporal life fades That which you possess is timeless. As a diamond in the rough concealed Your true beauty has been revealed For I have searched this life for a woman So true of such good strong virtue And now that I've found this all I want Is to be with you!!!!! 07/11/05

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January 7, 2009 04:35papaya

I think your poem is interesting too! I like the ending. Thanks for your comment. Yeah! there are better things than fish. :-)

January 27, 2009 19:42Janjan

Dear CHUCKSTER: Very passionate, and romantic, too. Loved it. Love, Janjan xoxo

March 27, 2009 12:49miss insashable

i like ur writings

April 28, 2009 13:59Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

this is very very great!
i love it! =]

July 3, 2010 05:35baya

This is really good:) i like it. check my poems out . . .