TRUE VALUE, by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
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As the candle light flickers upon your lovely
Radiant smile
I've caught a glimpse of something I can't forget
Even with the strongest denial.
The sense of such great love confused with
A pinch of hate.
For the past had seemed to darken your eyes
Like an impenetrable stain.
And this spot of unbridled fate has broken
All hope with such merciless pain
But looking deeper within I've seen past this
Thick wall of rain
And I've been caught up in something more than
Any man could ask for.
A passionate soul of diligent desire that has
Consumed my thoughts like wild fire!
So even though the beauty of this temporal life fades
That which you possess is timeless.
As a diamond in the rough concealed
Your true beauty has been revealed
For I have searched this life for a woman
So true of such good strong virtue
And now that I've found this all I want
Is to be with you!!!!!
07/11/05
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Posted: 2009-04-28 02:13:49 UTC |
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2009-01-07 04:35:55 | papaya |
I think your poem is interesting too! I like the ending. Thanks for your comment. Yeah! there are better things than fish. :-) |
2009-01-27 19:42:00 | Janjan |
Dear CHUCKSTER: Very passionate, and romantic, too. Loved it. Love, Janjan xoxo |
2010-07-03 05:35:17 | baya |
This is really good:) i like it. check my poems out . . . |