A VISION, by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
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All-alone in this room filled with sorrow
I envision a grate day as a sweeter marrow
& in doing so I yearn for your touch your loving embrace
To be with you once again & to see that beautiful smile upon
your face
At night I ponder on a breathless bliss
Of being by your side emirs in your loving tenderness
So as we walk hand in hand along the shore of a crystal blue
sea
Sharing a perfect complete love my deepest fantasy
I'd look deep into your eyes & know our feelings are as one
By this we are joined
True Intimacy
07/15/06 |
Posted: 2009-04-28 02:16:19 UTC |
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2008-08-16 06:58:33 | Simply-Me-20104 |
Awww this poem is so sweet! I love your word usage too! |
2009-01-03 01:08:44 | Janjan |
Dear Chuckster; Very deep, and emotionally written. Love it. Thanks for reading my poems. Glad you liked them. Love, Janjan xoxo |
2009-04-08 04:57:03 | papaya |
What a beautiful piece!! I like " true Intimacy" No plastic... |
2009-04-20 21:17:31 | Teresa |
WOW!!! i really like this one
Thank you for commenting my poems and no black and white is not about me but about a drawing that i saw n i decided to find the poem behind it
-Teresa |