A VISION

By !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! • April 28, 2009 02:16 UTC

All-alone in this room filled with sorrow I envision a grate day as a sweeter marrow & in doing so I yearn for your touch your loving embrace To be with you once again & to see that beautiful smile upon your face At night I ponder on a breathless bliss Of being by your side emirs in your loving tenderness So as we walk hand in hand along the shore of a crystal blue sea Sharing a perfect complete love my deepest fantasy I'd look deep into your eyes & know our feelings are as one By this we are joined True Intimacy 07/15/06

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August 16, 2008 06:58Simply-Me-20104

Awww this poem is so sweet! I love your word usage too!

January 3, 2009 01:08Janjan

Dear Chuckster; Very deep, and emotionally written. Love it. Thanks for reading my poems. Glad you liked them. Love, Janjan xoxo

February 28, 2009 05:21Natural_beauty_Ashe

this is great and very deep and revealing in a way.

April 8, 2009 04:57papaya

What a beautiful piece!! I like " true Intimacy" No plastic...

April 8, 2009 16:29!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

April 20, 2009 21:17Teresa

WOW!!! i really like this one
Thank you for commenting my poems and no black and white is not about me but about a drawing that i saw n i decided to find the poem behind it
-Teresa

April 20, 2009 21:35!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

THATS GOOD TO KNOW THANKS!

April 28, 2009 14:03Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

yes, this poem is sweet as "Just_A_Gurl... 20104" said.. i like it

April 10, 2010 21:56rebecca elizabeth pineda

Aw i like this poem