Pardon Me!!!, by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
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Can't you hear my soul so loudly screaming?
From this false hope and such relentless scheming?
Can't you see this heart has been taken?
Brutally shaken, battered, and breaking?
Can't you feel this heartache and pain?
As these tears roll off my face and descend like rain?
I need a hand to lift me up, not beat me down!
For this heart of mine is already deep beneath the ground
Bleeding, bound, lost amongst this rubble and cannot be
found.
Feel my suffering?
Hear my torment?
Can you see this complete despondency?
If so than you must taste the bitterness of hate that
consumed my sanity!!!!!!
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| Posted: 2009-04-16 21:09:35 UTC |
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| 2008-11-16 09:03:13 | Simply-Me-20104 |
| Thanks so much for the comments! It really means a lot to me! This is an extremely powerful poem and has a LOT to say! I admire your word usage! It flows REALLY well! |
| 2009-03-25 19:24:01 | kristin fricke |
| this is the poem i love.There is so much emotion behind it. And it is written perfectly! great job |
| 2009-04-14 17:03:24 | ... |
| Oooooh I love this! It's so powerful and emotional and really well written, well done!! |
| 2009-04-24 18:54:13 | Janjan |
| Dear !!!DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!: Good way of expressing yourself. Thanks for reading my poem Sweet Love Nectar. I'm so glad that you liked it. Love, Janjan xoxo |
| 2009-05-23 01:43:33 | izzy |
| wow such a powerful poem. great meaning and word choice, love the last two lines... amazing! |
| 2009-05-29 23:45:30 | Azure Faye |
| Hey Chuck. I was reading this, and i was like, I NEED to show this to my friend. Its like you wrote it for her. Your a wonderful person, ya know? Thats my judgement for you, mi amigo. |
| 2009-08-10 00:53:53 | ma_chapa3xD |
| oh W-O-W! that TOTALLY deserves a 10 haha:D youre awesome! keep it up |
| 2012-11-01 02:24:44 | Laura Glossop |
| Very powerful words, can almost here the pain within the words. Great job :) x |