HOOKED, by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
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I FEEL THIS HOOK MY MIND ON A TETHER
AS YOUR EYES FEED MY CURIOSITY THIS HUNGER GROWS STRONGER
THOUGH THIS DAY WAS ONCE A TOTAL DISASTER
JUST A GLIMPSE OF YOUR SWEET SMILE SEEM TO MAKE EVERY THING
BETTER
PONDERING THE THOUGHT THAT DRIVES THIS DESIRE THE DEMANDS OF
MY HEART PASSIONATELY POUNDS
FOR THE SENT OF YOUR BODY BRINGS ME TO MY KNEES
AND AS I THINK OF YOUR IRRISISTABLE SOFT SKIN, EVEN WITH THE
WORST SERCOMESTANCE THE ESSENCE OF YOUR REMEMBRANCE ABOUNDS
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| Posted: 2008-07-23 23:49:47 UTC |
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| 2008-12-28 04:50:53 | Simply-Me-20104 |
| Wow I admire the amount of description in your poetry!! It flows really well and sets a good schene in the reader's mind!! |
| 2009-03-12 00:01:14 | izzy |
| WOW, this is awsome. your metaphors are truely amazing. Overall, GREAT job! |
| 2009-05-14 04:39:39 | Chalan |
| I think this poem was great! I liked how your words came together. and so very passionate!! Also, thanks for the comments on my poems! |