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By !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

I FEEL THIS HOOK MY MIND ON A TETHER AS YOUR EYES FEED MY CURIOSITY THIS HUNGER GROWS STRONGER THOUGH THIS DAY WAS ONCE A TOTAL DISASTER JUST A GLIMPSE OF YOUR SWEET SMILE SEEM TO MAKE EVERY THING BETTER PONDERING THE THOUGHT THAT DRIVES THIS DESIRE THE DEMANDS OF MY HEART PASSIONATELY POUNDS FOR THE SENT OF YOUR BODY BRINGS ME TO MY KNEES AND AS I THINK OF YOUR IRRISISTABLE SOFT SKIN, EVEN WITH THE WORST SERCOMESTANCE THE ESSENCE OF YOUR REMEMBRANCE ABOUNDS

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December 28, 2008 04:50Simply-Me-20104

Wow I admire the amount of description in your poetry!! It flows really well and sets a good schene in the reader's mind!!

March 12, 2009 00:01izzy

WOW, this is awsome. your metaphors are truely amazing. Overall, GREAT job!

May 14, 2009 04:39Chalan

I think this poem was great! I liked how your words came together. and so very passionate!! Also, thanks for the comments on my poems!

June 27, 2009 14:41ma_chapa3xD

nice job!!!! :D

September 18, 2009 04:00POOR JOSIE >j

WOW!!