THIS HEART, by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
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The search of Love is great to him who is blind
so for this I plead!
Remove this veil from which I am bound
because I’ve been battered, bruised, and for death I
bleed
I have diligently sought to find true Love but have not
found!!
Lost in the shadows my soul turned to stone
from my needless desire of worthless lust.
And with the sands of time this Heart of steel
has begun to rust!!
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| Posted: 2009-05-12 16:59:07 UTC |
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| 2008-11-17 23:42:30 | Simply-Me-20104 |
| Again, your word usage is amazing and has such powerful stand in your work! Your poems have a lot to say! Very well done! |
| 2009-01-03 00:58:24 | Janjan |
| Dear Chuckster; Very deep and moving. Love it. Thanks for reading my poem, Maybe? Glad you liked it. Love, Janjan xoxo |
| 2009-03-23 16:39:25 | Metamorphoser |
| I like the ending most and I think many people share it..Thanks for reading my poem..Let me know what you think of the other ones. |
| 2009-03-28 04:39:27 | papaya |
| Amazing! I especailly like " my soul turned to stone." :-) |
| 2009-05-14 23:05:59 | izzy |
| wow! this is amazing and deep! i liked the words you used. |
| 2009-05-30 05:13:07 | dispersed_sky |
| i never say anyone this
"you are an amazing poet "
i never appreciate anyone like that
best of luck
Anonymous one |