THIS HEART

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By !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! •

The search of Love is great to him who is blind so for this I plead! Remove this veil from which I am bound because I’ve been battered, bruised, and for death I bleed I have diligently sought to find true Love but have not found!! Lost in the shadows my soul turned to stone from my needless desire of worthless lust. And with the sands of time this Heart of steel has begun to rust!!

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November 17, 2008 23:42Simply-Me-20104

Again, your word usage is amazing and has such powerful stand in your work! Your poems have a lot to say! Very well done!

January 3, 2009 00:58Janjan

Dear Chuckster; Very deep and moving. Love it. Thanks for reading my poem, Maybe? Glad you liked it. Love, Janjan xoxo

March 23, 2009 16:39Metamorphoser

I like the ending most and I think many people share it..Thanks for reading my poem..Let me know what you think of the other ones.

March 28, 2009 04:39papaya

Amazing! I especailly like " my soul turned to stone." :-)

May 14, 2009 23:05izzy

wow! this is amazing and deep! i liked the words you used.

May 30, 2009 05:13dispersed_sky

i never say anyone this
"you are an amazing poet "
i never appreciate anyone like that
best of luck

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August 7, 2011 08:15Natural_beauty_Ashe

I simply love this