blood, shaking, scared, her, Running, pretending........

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By more then just that girl •

Blood shot, tears and body hot. Thinking back on past battles fought. Her Shaking, Remembering his leaving, and her heart breaking. She is scared and alone. She feels she is so unknown. Only wishing she would be shown. So unlike her. To have a vision of so much blur. and her head to be so unsure Runing away. Unsure of the possibility. or anything that may. Pretening, venting, and reinventing. Dedication: Did anyone understand that??????

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October 17, 2008 01:19~Stay_Beautiful~20104

Actually, I think I sort of do! Some parts at least, if not all. That's not alwayz what poetry's about, so don't worry! Just get that emotion out there and you certainly did that exactly!! It seems to have a very interesting story behind it and really like the format of it!!