Lock, by Nightlife
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i wish i was a lock
to keep myself away
and the key is in my heart
for my love ones to touch
but either way
i'm fine were i stand
i thank God for that
i really dont wish
to be anyone or anything
but me really
because i got my peeps
and my Lord
right beside me... |
| Posted: 2008-08-08 07:52:11 UTC |
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| 2008-09-26 19:09:51 | Simply-Me-20104 |
| Haha that's right! I really like this poem! It has a great message in it! |
| 2009-04-21 19:13:51 | ... |
| This is such a cute poem! Love the message in it!
I'd maybe suggest just a little bit more punctuation, not much - that'd ruin it, but a little wouldn't do it too much harm =) |
| 2009-12-03 23:50:57 | Katelyn7 |
| i love this=] |