Imperfect

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By Invisible Poet

In the shadow of my soul i only do what i am told and i will never be whole i will be forever cold Inside this shell that is my body theirs the toll of the bell our outer appearance is so gaudy I dont see how anyone could have made us so flawed he stopped halfway through and said done the empty cold of my soul will never be thawed If their is a god then i wish he was dead instead of some drunken sod filling everybodys head With shitty ideas and false beliefs my life is not on a dias my soul is my own to keep.

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September 11, 2008 03:02loving and dreaming.

I have complete adoration for this piece.
Well done.

November 3, 2008 15:10Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

yes it is well done, thank you for the comment, i hope your not mad i put you on my user info.... because your poems really are amazing!!

February 5, 2009 15:19Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

(they still are)___(:

December 3, 2009 23:54Katelyn7

wow. i love this!