Masquerade

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By ray!

Night is here I can feel the darkness seeping into my skin beneath the mask on my face Feel the rush as I descend onto the cobblestones in my french heeled slippers tonight is mine, This night is mine. You are here and I detail the face behind your mask in my soul I know everything but you know only my mask Drunk with false ecstasy I drop my defenses tonight will be ours, This night is ours. Too late, I feel your hand moving to the bow at the back of my head And the mask falls before I can conceal my shame I fall to the ground, desolate, broken and wait for the shadow of your body to walk away But it only gets shorter as if you're coming down to the ground I feel your hand on my face I must look at you. And you say, "I knew it was you I waited for you to come To make this a night for rememebering"

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September 25, 2008 02:05moshqueen

This is wonderful.




Thank you for your comment on my poem. its one of my favorites.

October 11, 2008 03:46Felicia

wow....you are very talented i love your work :)

October 29, 2008 06:43Invisible Poet

very expressive, its almost like im standing their watching, New poem out (Birth) let me know... thnx

February 6, 2009 17:29*Confidential~Versifier*

I Love this.....

You are here
and I detail the face
behind your mask in my soul
I know everything
but you know only my mask
Drunk with false ecstasy
I drop my defenses
tonight will be ours,
This night is ours.

(You Clean as Washed Clothes)
an naw i didnt get wut i deserved
i juss slipped up LOL

February 16, 2009 16:27ray!

thanks for commenting

February 20, 2009 03:52LostSoul

Wow...very nicely done.

March 19, 2009 15:52!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

WELL DONE I LIKE THE WAY YOU WROTE THIS