Thank You, by Chalan
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I want to thank you for standing by my side.
I want to thank you for being my shelter when
I want to run away and hide.
I want to thank you for being my rock when
I am weak.
I want to thank you for the moments when you
Let your heart speak.
I want to thank you for your warm and gentle
Touch.
And for loving me so very much.
I want to thank you for never giving up on me
And for expressing the beauty you see in me.
I love you honey and I always will for all
Eternity.
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| Posted: 2008-09-23 03:23:05 UTC |
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| 2009-03-10 02:39:36 | Felicia |
| Hum...I like commenting on virgin poems (ones without posts) because I know you would like to know how good they were as well. Off topic a bit So.. this poem is very sweet. Almost like a vow to the person that your writing about. Its a little cookie cutter but at the same time original. It would have been nice to put in more creativity but there is no question in my mind that this is good but i do feel like you have more potential to express your self better and fresher. I wish all the best Felicia Mac |