My Lucid Dreams

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By izzy •

i hear these sounds, people i cannot see. all of these shadows, are coming for me. why can't i understand that you're not real? they say i can't see you, but i still can feel... all of this pain. that i throw away. it just isn't the same when you say i am sane. you were my dream girl, key word you were dream too bad my life cannot be peaceful, serene. 9/26/08

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February 23, 2009 00:41Teresa

i really liked this one i knw how you feel keep up the good work
-Teresa

March 2, 2009 11:30miss insashable

i can relate to this, ty for the new comment on my page, our writing mayb a lil smimilar in that its both pretty raw and honest

May 17, 2009 18:31...

Wow I really like this, it's simple but honest.

July 2, 2009 20:33♥ Leah ☺

This is a really good poem, simple, but powerful, and it's reeally nicely written. thanks for the comments on my poems by the way, i appreciate them :)

July 10, 2009 00:54Nightlife

Nice,I love the atmosphere of this poem.

December 17, 2009 23:28Convalescence

I really like this one. I think it's my fav or urs.