My Ambitions !, by Gold
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I never got what all I wanted at times
I did get something which I needed at times
I tried to be happy with what is given, even when
I did not get what all I needed.
I want to be good to all around me
I become bad at times when I try to do it
I wanted to do to others what I want
I did not get to do what others want
I want to live on my own till my end
I want to share my thoughts with others
I want to live a peaceful life always
I do not know how I will end.
My comments to my poem: Dear friends!
This is my fist poem in my life. I have crossed 59 years so
far as per calender. I dont know how my poem is. What I have
written is some of my feeling I really had & have.
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| Posted: 2008-11-07 17:32:13 UTC |
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| 2008-12-13 06:03:27 | ~Stay_Beautiful~20104 |
| I can tell that this poem came from the heart! My advice: keep writing! It doesn't matter what others think, it's how it makes YOU feel! I think this one's great and wish you luck with any further works! |
| 2009-05-03 19:49:49 | ... |
| I like this - it's really emotional. Yeah it could do witha bit of work in places, but who cares? No poem is perfect. The way I see it as long as a poem makes me feel something then its done something right and this one did! Well done! I'd keep writing if I were you, you have realy potential. |