My Ambitions !

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By Gold •

I never got what all I wanted at times I did get something which I needed at times I tried to be happy with what is given, even when I did not get what all I needed. I want to be good to all around me I become bad at times when I try to do it I wanted to do to others what I want I did not get to do what others want I want to live on my own till my end I want to share my thoughts with others I want to live a peaceful life always I do not know how I will end. My comments to my poem: Dear friends! This is my fist poem in my life. I have crossed 59 years so far as per calender. I dont know how my poem is. What I have written is some of my feeling I really had & have.

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December 13, 2008 06:03~Stay_Beautiful~20104

I can tell that this poem came from the heart! My advice: keep writing! It doesn't matter what others think, it's how it makes YOU feel! I think this one's great and wish you luck with any further works!

May 3, 2009 19:49...

I like this - it's really emotional. Yeah it could do witha bit of work in places, but who cares? No poem is perfect. The way I see it as long as a poem makes me feel something then its done something right and this one did! Well done! I'd keep writing if I were you, you have realy potential.