Let It Out, by izzy
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johnny's parents were arguing, arguing, arguing some more
he could hear everything they said even past his door
now johnny's growing up and john is in highschool
john is sniffing things, smoking things so he can be cool
johnathan grew and grew up even more
had all his demons past him but he's caught deep in the war
when all of it was over he let out a cry and then a shout
the best solutions to his problems was for him to let it
out
11/10/2008 |
Posted: 2008-11-11 01:23:46 UTC |
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2009-01-27 10:02:41 | miss insashable |
i really liked this poem simple and short but to the point, all ur writing is good |
2009-05-15 21:35:11 | ... |
Oooh this one's really good. It's honest and striaght to the point, it doens't have to hide behind a load of fancy language because it just sounds great and is really emotive! |
2009-06-17 02:42:10 | 11 Tragedy's |
Wow...that reminds me of a couple of my friends actually...I like it! |