Let It Out

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By izzy

johnny's parents were arguing, arguing, arguing some more he could hear everything they said even past his door now johnny's growing up and john is in highschool john is sniffing things, smoking things so he can be cool johnathan grew and grew up even more had all his demons past him but he's caught deep in the war when all of it was over he let out a cry and then a shout the best solutions to his problems was for him to let it out 11/10/2008

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January 27, 2009 10:02miss insashable

i really liked this poem simple and short but to the point, all ur writing is good

April 10, 2009 05:44LostSoul

well penned

May 15, 2009 21:35...

Oooh this one's really good. It's honest and striaght to the point, it doens't have to hide behind a load of fancy language because it just sounds great and is really emotive!

June 17, 2009 02:4211 Tragedy's

Wow...that reminds me of a couple of my friends actually...I like it!