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this poem kind of hurts to know this is how you truly feel but there is an answer to your question he dose exist within my heart and the more he shows the more the world hates me
they say if you ask for help or forgiveness god is always there.well when i creid for his help he never was there for me thats why in my heart god is in everyones imagination.
a lot of the time i'v gone through massive pain without help. pleading for mercy with no avail. but at the end of such trials i'v found a cross road + of true love or absolute hate. so i picked true love and learned that yes it hurt to go through this alone but later in life this pain brought me closer to my true loved ones..... relation comes from the understanding of a pain or happiness that cannot be forgot (( relation + love = true intimacy )) I WENT THROUGH MY PAIN SO I COULD HELP YOU! AND CHRIST DIED TO HELP ALL OF US!!!!!
wow i never thought like that.and yes everything we have or are forced to go through hurts really bad and if christ died to help us why do we suffer so?
THE WORLD IS A JAGGED PAINFUL PLACE AND NOT ONE OF US WILL GO THROUGH IT WITHOUT FEELING ITS SHARP EDGES. LIFE IS DEFINED
BY THEM! SOME FIGHT AND SOME HIDE. ITS HOW WE TAKE THE PAIN THAT MOLDS THE PERSON THAT WE BECOME!!! ONCE I WAS A COWERED BUT NOW I AM A WORRIER !!!!!!!!
ONE QUESTION..... HOW WOULD WE KNOW THE SWEET TASTE OF VICTORY WITHOUT THE BITTER TASTE OF DEFEAT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yes i agree.and as for ur question that is also true but i guess when negativity is enforced upon me i began to thnk in only negative ways.i gotta think about this.:))
live and learn with eyes open =)
i cant promise u i will but i can promise u and myself i will try. :)
i can see u got everyone talking with this poem, i have to say that this topic interests me, and if u write another poem about God i want u to go into the depth of ur emotion and let it all out.... i think ur a very talented writer.... express more expand ur vocabulary....
thnk u for feedback i will be sure to consider ur advice :)
Good poem... not agreeing whatsoever though... not even to an extent... but again good poem... i like to think god is random but hes always there you know? when he really feels you need him he is there but if he knows you can pull urself outta of this ditch urself he just gives u confidence and consistancy to live in this cold world. he loves you and he sends his love but u deny to meet him half way...
Good poem... not agreeing whatsoever though... not even to an extent... but again good poem... i like to think god is random but hes always there you know? when he really feels you need him he is there but if he knows you can pull urself outta of this ditch urself he just gives u confidence and consistancy to live in this cold world. he loves you and he sends his love but u deny to meet him half way...
Thnkx for the comment.....i actually wrote this a while ago and i contradict this poem now...i have my daughter and i feel that god gave her to me just when i was about to give up on life...
I now there is a really God and He does love us. But we have got to ask for his help. He wants us to talk [pray] to even when things arent going wrong. You can think whatever you what about God.
Thnx for the comment and you are entitled to your opinion but i had to find god on my own and make that connection..........and i did :)
Dis is awesome, not da poem much, but da poem and coments together, B) im glad you found God and went from a non believer to receiving JESUS CHRIST
Thank you im glad i did too