Keep Holding On, by izzy
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on the summer days you feel so cold
what was a flawless face is now old
you think that you do it for a cause
but your ingnorance is your only flaw
you think what you eat is garbage
but eating your finger does the real damage
your will power, you think you're so strong
sometime it's a good thing in this case it is wrong
who's gonna save your life, your soul
you have a friend, your story will be told
fighting hard, do not relapse
your will power's better now than in the past
dedicated to one of my friends who had an eating disorder.
she has finally overcome it and is fighting hard not to
relapse. |
Posted: 2009-04-01 01:26:42 UTC |
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2008-12-10 02:38:13 | Chalan |
I like this poem. its very interesting and different.
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2009-04-26 20:41:22 | ♥`HopeBringsSorrow`♥ |
this is great!! it really speaks to me....you see...i used to have an eating disorder and its really hard on everyone....its always good to have a friend...very good job |
2009-04-26 20:41:23 | ♥`HopeBringsSorrow`♥ |
this is great!! it really speaks to me....you see...i used to have an eating disorder and its really hard on everyone....its always good to have a friend...very good job |
2009-05-06 23:08:56 | ma_chapa3xD |
aww! that's really sweet of you!
keep on writing!
*Rachel :"D |
2009-05-10 23:33:43 | amylynn242 |
yes, my poem, The Worst Pie's In London Was from Sweeney Todd...lol |
2009-05-16 23:24:30 | Your Everlasting |
This is good I used to have an eating disorder when I was four-six so I can understand how your friend fells well sorta. |
2009-06-24 05:18:16 | Simply-Me-20104 |
Best of wishes to your friend and Kudos to you for being there for her!! Great poem! |
2009-07-26 05:41:56 | Lily |
this is a very well done poem |
2010-02-07 00:28:44 | Disruptive Silence |
this is so amazing and inspiring! you told a story in poetic form and that is hard to do! |