Keep Holding On

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By izzy

on the summer days you feel so cold what was a flawless face is now old you think that you do it for a cause but your ingnorance is your only flaw you think what you eat is garbage but eating your finger does the real damage your will power, you think you're so strong sometime it's a good thing in this case it is wrong who's gonna save your life, your soul you have a friend, your story will be told fighting hard, do not relapse your will power's better now than in the past dedicated to one of my friends who had an eating disorder. she has finally overcome it and is fighting hard not to relapse.

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December 10, 2008 02:38Chalan

I like this poem. its very interesting and different.

March 25, 2009 21:28!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

well done

April 26, 2009 20:41♥`HopeBringsSorrow`♥

this is great!! it really speaks to me....you see...i used to have an eating disorder and its really hard on everyone....its always good to have a friend...very good job

April 26, 2009 20:41♥`HopeBringsSorrow`♥

this is great!! it really speaks to me....you see...i used to have an eating disorder and its really hard on everyone....its always good to have a friend...very good job

May 6, 2009 23:08ma_chapa3xD

aww! that's really sweet of you!
keep on writing!
*Rachel :"D

May 10, 2009 23:33amylynn242

yes, my poem, The Worst Pie's In London Was from Sweeney Todd...lol

May 16, 2009 23:24Your Everlasting

This is good I used to have an eating disorder when I was four-six so I can understand how your friend fells well sorta.

June 24, 2009 05:18Simply-Me-20104

Best of wishes to your friend and Kudos to you for being there for her!! Great poem!

July 26, 2009 05:41Lily

this is a very well done poem

February 7, 2010 00:28Disruptive Silence

this is so amazing and inspiring! you told a story in poetic form and that is hard to do!