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By Interlude •

I sit, I watch, I wait, I bruise, I cut, I brake, I let, I do, I don't I don't allow people in, I do push people out, I don't stop the madness, I sit, I watch, I wait, I bruise, I cut, I brake, I let, I do, I don't I bruise quickly when hit, I cut slowly, I brake mentaly, I sit, I watch, I wait, I bruise, I cut, I brake, I let, I do, I don't I sit as I allow it all to happen, I watch as it glides across my skin, I wait for the pain, I sit. I watch. I wait. I bruise. I cut. I brake. I let. I do. I don't.

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April 9, 2005 19:54Cpick

Intense. Like a never ending circle of emotion and pain... great portrayal of the storm within your soul.

April 9, 2005 22:07Interlude

Thanks. For giving a comment and reading.

April 25, 2005 19:01Lillian

Beautiful. I always feel that sort of stuff going on inside of me, too. Now I'm anxious to read your other works. -Cindy

July 10, 2005 19:08XRebzX

I really like this poem, well thought out and full of emotion. Very very good, weel done! :)