Used up toy, by LostSoul
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My heart is like a toy,
Pleasure to play with
Until you get bored.
Battered and bruised
From your carelessness.
Threw me away
Like a used up toy.
Now I'm trash...
Who would care for a toy
That's beat up and broken.
Who would come
And fix my broken heart.
I'm lost and forgotten.
Deeply hurt and saddened. |
Posted: 2008-12-04 05:30:09 UTC |
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2008-12-10 02:36:53 | Chalan |
I like how you have written this. This poem really expresses what a broken heart is really like. |
2008-12-13 22:10:41 | Julia Anne |
I love this! It's hard to put words to this kind of thing, but you have done it magnificently! |
2009-01-01 01:50:48 | LostSoul |
Thank you Chalan and Julia for your comments. |
2009-05-28 19:56:27 | KayDe$ |
This is a great poem. I like it a lot. This is the poem that sums up how my ex treated me. |