I LOVE YOU !!!, by !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
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I FEEL YOU THERE SHEDDING YOUR TEARS
LIVING YOUR LIE &
OVERWHELMED BY YOUR FEARS.
VICIOUSLY BEATEN YOUR HEART LAYS IN THE DIRT LEFT TO DIE
EMOTIONALLY DETACHED CAN YOU SEE HOW MUCH I REALLY CARE?
YEARNING FOR YOUR AFFECTION I WAIT WITH SUCH DESPERATION
OTHERS THINK I'M CRAZY BUT I KNOW WE MAKE THE PERFECT PAIR
UNTIL THE END UNITED WE SHALL WALK TO OUR FINAL DESTINATION
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02/26/09 |
| Posted: 2009-04-30 03:31:59 UTC |
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| 2008-12-24 06:15:37 | Simply-Me-20104 |
| Wow! This is really powerful! Shows a heart's true feelings! |
| 2009-01-23 18:58:52 | miss insashable |
| i liked it, i feel it would have been better had you have kept going, feels like you have alot to say and its worth saying lol. keep up the good work |
| 2009-02-16 19:33:29 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
| its so amazing and passionate and its like your saying someting and you know that this is not all you want to say.so keep going. |
| 2009-02-16 19:33:46 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
| its so amazing and passionate and its like your saying someting and you know that this is not all you want to say.so keep going. |
| 2009-03-26 02:18:50 | Chalan |
| I liked how you had written your poem. It's unique. And I like the passion and emotion in your words. Nicely written. And thank-you for your comments on my poem "Stand" |
| 2009-05-06 14:41:02 | Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* |
| WOW! i think thats all i can say.. its great, beautiful, lovely, graciuos, every nice respectful word.! |
| 2009-06-11 16:13:39 | 11 Tragedy's |
| That's pretty deep, I know the feeling of waiting though, I hate it sometimes, but it's worth it. |
| 2009-09-02 21:14:50 | MAC |
| Everything that should be said instead of wait... P.S. New poems up on my end!!! And you are awesome!!!!!!! |