I LOVE YOU !!!

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By !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! •

I FEEL YOU THERE SHEDDING YOUR TEARS LIVING YOUR LIE & OVERWHELMED BY YOUR FEARS. VICIOUSLY BEATEN YOUR HEART LAYS IN THE DIRT LEFT TO DIE EMOTIONALLY DETACHED CAN YOU SEE HOW MUCH I REALLY CARE? YEARNING FOR YOUR AFFECTION I WAIT WITH SUCH DESPERATION OTHERS THINK I'M CRAZY BUT I KNOW WE MAKE THE PERFECT PAIR UNTIL THE END UNITED WE SHALL WALK TO OUR FINAL DESTINATION & T H A T S H A L L N E V E R C H A N G E ! ! ! 02/26/09

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December 24, 2008 06:15Simply-Me-20104

Wow! This is really powerful! Shows a heart's true feelings!

January 23, 2009 18:58miss insashable

i liked it, i feel it would have been better had you have kept going, feels like you have alot to say and its worth saying lol. keep up the good work

February 16, 2009 19:33Natural_beauty_Ashe

its so amazing and passionate and its like your saying someting and you know that this is not all you want to say.so keep going.

February 16, 2009 19:33Natural_beauty_Ashe

its so amazing and passionate and its like your saying someting and you know that this is not all you want to say.so keep going.

March 21, 2009 13:02CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

WOW! THIS IS AMAZING, SO MANY STRONG FEELINGS SHOW IN THIS ONE POEM. GOOD JOB

March 26, 2009 02:18Chalan

I liked how you had written your poem. It's unique. And I like the passion and emotion in your words. Nicely written. And thank-you for your comments on my poem "Stand"

March 28, 2009 06:05!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

THANK YOU ALL FOR READING

May 6, 2009 14:41Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

WOW! i think thats all i can say.. its great, beautiful, lovely, graciuos, every nice respectful word.!

June 11, 2009 16:1311 Tragedy's

That's pretty deep, I know the feeling of waiting though, I hate it sometimes, but it's worth it.

September 2, 2009 21:14MAC

Everything that should be said instead of wait... P.S. New poems up on my end!!! And you are awesome!!!!!!!