I won't be denied, by LostSoul
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I won't be denied
You can't break anymore
I won't be ignored
This is my life
This is my time
The time is right
The time is now
I won't be denied
I'm not afraid
This is my life
This is my time
This is for real
This is my resolution
To the situation
I'm a whole new revolution
It starts inside of me
The time is right
The time is now
This is for real
I won't be denied
I won't be denied
My dreams
My hopes
It's all inside of me
I won't be denied
I won't be denied
Of my own reality
Of what's inside of me |
| Posted: 2008-12-29 05:20:48 UTC |
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| 2009-01-16 05:57:08 | Shine-On |
| Very well written. I like what the repetition adds to the impact of the words. I think this is deep within it's depth. That is to say that it is a poem that begins deep, you find yourself thinking about it, and then you find yourself thinking about it more and more and longer and longer the further you get or the more you find. Very nicely written and I'll be watching :) |
| 2009-01-16 06:16:30 | Shine-On |
| Very well written. I like what the repetition adds to the impact of the words. I think this is deep within it's depth. That is to say that it is a poem that begins deep, you find yourself thinking about it, and then you find yourself thinking about it more and more and longer and longer the further you get or the more you find. Very nicely written and I'll be watching :) |
| 2009-01-16 07:33:26 | LostSoul |
| Thank you very much Shine-On for taking the time to read my work. |