I won't be denied

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By LostSoul •

I won't be denied You can't break anymore I won't be ignored This is my life This is my time The time is right The time is now I won't be denied I'm not afraid This is my life This is my time This is for real This is my resolution To the situation I'm a whole new revolution It starts inside of me The time is right The time is now This is for real I won't be denied I won't be denied My dreams My hopes It's all inside of me I won't be denied I won't be denied Of my own reality Of what's inside of me

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January 16, 2009 05:57Shine-On

Very well written. I like what the repetition adds to the impact of the words. I think this is deep within it's depth. That is to say that it is a poem that begins deep, you find yourself thinking about it, and then you find yourself thinking about it more and more and longer and longer the further you get or the more you find. Very nicely written and I'll be watching :)

January 16, 2009 06:16Shine-On

Very well written. I like what the repetition adds to the impact of the words. I think this is deep within it's depth. That is to say that it is a poem that begins deep, you find yourself thinking about it, and then you find yourself thinking about it more and more and longer and longer the further you get or the more you find. Very nicely written and I'll be watching :)

January 16, 2009 07:33LostSoul

Thank you very much Shine-On for taking the time to read my work.