Razor, by Imagine
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I cry out as Aneh shaves my legs,
It hurts, pains my very core.
She wont stop.
Its an obsession.
Stop.
Slices up and down.
Hair falls to the linoleum floor like teardrops.
The razor rapidly peels off what dignity I had left.
She uses her bloody fingers to traze abstract images into my
sore flesh.
I cry out her name and collapse on the toilet, face-down.
I burn with shame.
Stop.
She never does.
I have nothing left, for she shaved my honor till I was
baren with slick blood.
Dont stop. |
Posted: 2009-01-16 17:59:50 UTC |
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2009-01-16 18:39:05 | Gawjous Idiot |
OmG tHaT wAs Aw3SoMe.
U rOx Go GuRl |
2009-02-06 07:00:35 | Shine-On |
Very well written. i love it so much. i hope you take time to maybe look at some stuff i have written almost similar to this. not in content but in writing style. i must say it is very different and i dont necessarily understand it but for some reason i still really like it. just the way the words float through my mind makes me enjoy it. I vote you a 9. :) very nice |
2010-04-12 19:55:35 | Gawjous Idiot |
OMGSH BEEAAAUUUTTTIIIFFFUUULLLL
i love you.
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