the falling tree, by Natural_beauty_Ashe
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14 years ago a tree started growing
at the same time i was borrn so was this tree
that was 14 years ago
and now that tree hs started to fall
it has put me in a state that disables me to move
and everytime i strive to remove this tree it keeps falling
down upon me
crushing me more anad more everyay
but that is only because i let it
i know i have to gain the strength to remove this tree but i
just dont know when that day will be |
| Posted: 2009-01-19 22:48:51 UTC |
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| 2009-02-03 02:06:01 | Chalan |
| I liked how this poem was written and how you used the tree to symbolize something crushing in your life. |
| 2009-04-11 02:32:24 | izzy |
| wow great use of symbolism. very meaningful and powerful. |