the falling tree

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By Natural_beauty_Ashe •

14 years ago a tree started growing at the same time i was borrn so was this tree that was 14 years ago and now that tree hs started to fall it has put me in a state that disables me to move and everytime i strive to remove this tree it keeps falling down upon me crushing me more anad more everyay but that is only because i let it i know i have to gain the strength to remove this tree but i just dont know when that day will be

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February 3, 2009 02:06Chalan

I liked how this poem was written and how you used the tree to symbolize something crushing in your life.

March 28, 2009 06:50Natural_beauty_Ashe

thnx

April 11, 2009 02:32izzy

wow great use of symbolism. very meaningful and powerful.

April 18, 2009 03:00Natural_beauty_Ashe

thnk you