a world untold

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By Natural_beauty_Ashe

when your a child you believe that there are endless possibilities when you are young santa claus is real and on christmas he is all you feel everyone is so true to life and they are who you dream of at night but soon enough those dreams will end and soon enough youll have to defend cause what you blieve as a child is never actually true to life dreams will end and nightmares will begin in a world untold which turns out to be the truth of life youll behold

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February 12, 2009 23:16!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

nicely done

March 24, 2009 23:29!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

I FIND THAT AT FIRST LIFE IS A BIT SCARY
AND SOME TIMES VERY UGLY BUT WHEN TRUE LOVE IS REVEALED YOU WILL SEE THAT IT IS NOT WITH IN ONLY ONE PERSON BUT IT IS AS SEED. PLANT IT NURTURE IT AND IT SHALL GROW!!! & LIFE WITH THIS IS MUCH MORE BEAUTIFUL SO HAPPY PLANTING =)

March 25, 2009 00:24Natural_beauty_Ashe

thnx for the advice ill take it into consideration