A Simple Blade of Grass

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By izzy •

Of the billions of people in this world, together we're viewed as a mass. individually different, yet seen as a simple blade of grass. If I grow tall, shout out and scream, I will not be heard, I will not be seen. when they look at me I am the same as you, or at least it would seem. And when I die no one will see, as another blade of grass soon replaces me...

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January 29, 2009 23:12SMILING DARKNESS

Omg....
This one is amazing and leaves me speechless...
It's so right to the point and honest.

this is very good!

January 30, 2009 21:31miss insashable

whoa i love this poem, and i like ur writing style

February 12, 2009 22:15Azure Faye

Vetibemly awesomely superfish.(that means good)

March 1, 2009 09:14LostSoul

excellent write and metaphor

March 29, 2009 05:34Simply-Me-20104

Wow... this is so true.... And deep!! I really like it! Very passionate and creative!

April 17, 2009 01:21David Zamora

This is a deep poem, something we all can relate to. Great work.

June 23, 2009 00:54~The Familiar Side of Strange~

this reminds me of one of my favorite writters, Walt Whitman. i love the style you chose to write for this. great work. good luck.

September 22, 2009 02:23Disruptive Silence

This is so nice and meaningful! You have commented so many nice things on my poetry and i really appreciate it!
Back to your poem, this is something that could be put into a book and they would end up studying it in a highschool classroom and everyone has to decpher the meanings behind the words

November 16, 2009 23:18StarStarlit

i absolutely love this poem-so touching, and simple, yet symbolizes so so much-i luv ur writing-plz continue :))

December 30, 2009 03:06Convalescence

I love the last line, it's amazing

December 14, 2010 03:47ma_chapa3xD

simply amazing as always:)