Standing In The Rain

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By LostSoul

I'm standing in the rain Awhile, soaking all the pain Tears keep falling from the sky And nothing's left inside But pieces of my heart Breaking in and out I should've known it from the start That you would leave me out I should've known from the very first kiss And the very last diss When you said you didn't love me How could you when you left me? Alone No one to blame But my own I should've known I'm standing in the rain Awhile, soaking all the pain Tears keep falling from the sky And nothing's left inside So many times I tried To talk But all you do is walk Why don't you walk your talk So many broken promises you promised Just another talk Of neverending promises That was broken and missed Like starting a family you and I We could've been set Flown around the world on a jet Just another broken promise of how we met Now my tears won't end My heart won't mend Angels please send Take me to another place Where my heart is safe Take me away from my destination And show me my salvation From devastation Take me and make me another creation I'm standing in the rain Awhile, soaking all the pain Tears keep falling from the sky And nothing's left inside

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February 8, 2009 03:45Azure Faye

This was SO GOOD!!
i ♥'d it!!!

February 11, 2009 06:48LostSoul

Thank you Azure Faye

February 12, 2009 22:18Azure Faye

Your welcome! i just read it again and its SO GOOD!!!!

February 13, 2009 14:11Chalan

I really liked this. You can feel the bitterness and the pain behind your words. Good job.

February 14, 2009 00:22LostSoul

Thank you Chalan.

February 18, 2009 20:05ray!

"Tears keep falling from the sky
And nothing's left inside"
my fave part, I love it!!

February 19, 2009 08:05LostSoul

Thank you very much ray!

March 1, 2009 14:45izzy

This is SO GREAT! every stanza is perfect in showing the true emotion and pain. GREAT JOB!!

March 8, 2009 01:25Kimberly

very nive.Love it !