I Lost Me.....When You Lost You

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By more then just that girl

Words filled with silents. Conversation filled with no words. I don't know where your mind is. And you dont understand this. You tell me everything is all right. But If it was I wouldnt cry at night. I lost me When you lost you Torn and cant break free. This really is nothing new. Everyday I feel you slip away. Your in days of depression giving me a heartbreaking impression. Ever since then you became a different man Even though I see you your not really here. Even though I kno you need me... I just dont know where. I come to your house late. I see you sitting outside while you wait. You laugh... but its not your old laugh... Its the 'everythings changed' laugh.. you hug me with out me even feeling the embrace. Your hugg was what USED to make my heart race... "Get lost?" you ask. Time to take off half the mask. "Yeah." I say and as u turn to lead the way. I start to think ....'I lost me....when you lost you."

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February 7, 2009 20:16ma_chapa3xD

THAT WAS AWESOME!!! i loved it! :) write MORE! ppl r gonna b INSPIRED lol
check out'The road'
keep on writing!~
*RAchEL FrElLa* ;)

February 8, 2009 03:42Azure Faye

Your poem was super good. super fish. hey is it just a coincidence that one of my poems is called 'i wanna be more than JUST A GIRL?' just curioss...
Write on
(ha ha i crack myself up)

May 3, 2009 21:37more then just that girl

yea it is....and Ill check it out