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By undiscovered

Deep, dark secrets within me, raging to flow out. They have only just begun to amplify, and are ready to demolish me. My eyes are contemplating the unimaginable. Forcing an unsecured implication, above the uncontrollable, Enduring this evident depression, should have been best left undone. Locked away, protected behind a devoted deffence. It is now desiring freedom, longing to break free. I am caged between the truth and what is perceived to be. It has finally caved in, bitterly, battening every inch. Slowly, conquering, overcoming, And engulfing me, disheartening me instantly. Without a consideration or logic. This imperfection has been unleashed, Causing me to undergo an emotional reaction. Which has been avoided, for a lifetime now. Now is the time to create an image, A clear image of authenticity, Of reliability, and of trustworthy. As I can no longer bear witness to the destruction it has caused me deeply..

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February 22, 2009 03:36*HEARTS*CRY*OUT*

OMG! I LOVE IT ITS SOOO GOOD! thx for tha comment by tha way! :)

February 22, 2009 03:43undiscovered

Heyy thanks 4 the comment!! :D

February 22, 2009 05:37*HEARTS*CRY*OUT*

lol thx your a great writer too you should post more! and thx for da comments

February 23, 2009 00:43Teresa

i liked it it was very good i cant wait to see what u come up with next

April 20, 2009 21:44!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

VERY WELL DONE...I LIKE HOW IT ALL CAME TOGETHER

October 22, 2009 07:11LostSoul

nicely done