Friends

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By Gutta Chic

you say u love me but u left wit out a word u said u wouldn't leave but da last thing i heard was da door close behind u you left me there, notin' else to do Now u come runnin' to me, cuz she left u wit notin' expectin' me to let you in, like we still 2geda or sometin' I loved u, more dan she nd now u finally see i was more loyal, kind nd nice now my heart... is filled wit ice u did dis 2 yoself, i'm lookin' 4 a better man some1 2 love me, 2 carry out our plan No mo heart breaks, or demands no mo freebee's, or holdin' hands when it's all ova, near da end I guess i'm try'na say u can still be my friend

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March 14, 2009 01:55CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

OHHHHHH!!!!! im sorry!!! really good!!!

March 16, 2009 01:29BUBBA

the poem was okay but you have to keep the readers attention. In poetry you cant ramble cause you loose what your meaning.