my romeo and julliet, by Natural_beauty_Ashe Subscribe to rss feed for Natural_beauty_Ashe

disputes between our familys had been flaring for years
but none of this would matter when my eyes met his

forbidden to be together we knew thats what we were
but what we felt in our hearts made everything else not
matter

why did i love him?
was the question that often crossed my mind
why love at first sight and why a love so devine

we tried countless times to just let our love be free
but no matter what
they would not let us be

we took one more step so that we could share our love for
time, i put an end to his life and he put and end to mine

now no one could bother us and we could finally be
together forever simply sharing our love in peace


            THERE LOVE WAS JUST TO GREAT
Posted: 2009-02-28 05:55:12 UTC

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2009-03-21 13:05:04CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART
THIS IS A GREAT POEM, IT HAS EMOTIONS THATT SHOW AND ARE VERY STRONG!! GOOD JOB

2009-03-24 20:08:59Natural_beauty_Ashe
thnk you very much i try to write watever im feeling

2012-04-28 04:52:16lance
a glimpse inside the heart... ever so deep and full of secrets,,,,,ties that bind can be easily broken... emotion of love and soul and desire is seen here,,,,masterful work nicely written.

2012-05-09 13:07:16Natural_beauty_Ashe
Thank you so much for your comment, when all else fails love finds ways to prevail

2012-09-10 23:36:04lance
just like those who seek god he shall be found,,,,,like u seek love it comes when u least expect it,,,maybe yr heart lies but it also tells the truth a very good poem,,,,my friend i wish u peace.

2012-10-12 04:21:10Natural_beauty_Ashe
thank you so much ;)