my romeo and julliet

By Natural_beauty_Ashe • February 28, 2009 05:55 UTC

disputes between our familys had been flaring for years but none of this would matter when my eyes met his forbidden to be together we knew thats what we were but what we felt in our hearts made everything else not matter why did i love him? was the question that often crossed my mind why love at first sight and why a love so devine we tried countless times to just let our love be free but no matter what they would not let us be we took one more step so that we could share our love for time, i put an end to his life and he put and end to mine now no one could bother us and we could finally be together forever simply sharing our love in peace THERE LOVE WAS JUST TO GREAT

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March 21, 2009 13:05CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

THIS IS A GREAT POEM, IT HAS EMOTIONS THATT SHOW AND ARE VERY STRONG!!
GOOD JOB

March 24, 2009 20:08Natural_beauty_Ashe

thnk you very much i try to write watever im feeling

April 28, 2012 04:52lance

a glimpse inside the heart... ever so deep and full of secrets,,,,,ties that bind can be easily broken... emotion of love and soul and desire is seen here,,,,masterful work nicely written.

May 9, 2012 13:07Natural_beauty_Ashe

Thank you so much for your comment, when all else fails love finds ways to prevail

September 10, 2012 23:36lance

just like those who seek god he shall be found,,,,,like u seek love it comes when u least expect it,,,maybe yr heart lies but it also tells the truth a very good poem,,,,my friend i wish u peace.

October 12, 2012 04:21Natural_beauty_Ashe

thank you so much ;)