drinking and driving, by Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* Subscribe to rss feed for Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

on a warm and fuzzy night
something just didnt feel right
alcohol was all that i tasted 
next thing you knew that i was wasted

people told me that i shouldnt drive when id been drinking
what in the world was i thinking?
this was the price i had to pay
to be here dead on the ground i lay

my head was spinning, spinning wild
here i am just a young child
i didnt see those other cars 
the only thing i saw was a bunch of stars

i was waiting for the pain to come
because my whole body was feeling numb
when the flashbacks of my life began
i knew this was it,it was the end

i hope this teaches a lesson here
when you drink and drive i hope it causes you fear
because drinking and driving is not healthy
even if you are rich and wealhy
Posted: 2009-03-03 15:38:33 UTC

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2009-03-05 05:45:04*Psychopathic Child*
I like this poem its very true and your right people should fear the drinking and the driving.

2009-03-05 14:58:30Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
thank you

2009-03-09 20:45:19CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART
THIS IS THE FIRST PEOM I READ AND THAT IS WHY I AM HERE. YOU HAVE GREAT TALLENT, KEEP IT UP!!

2009-03-16 13:59:25Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
thank you