drinking and driving

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By Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* •

on a warm and fuzzy night something just didnt feel right alcohol was all that i tasted next thing you knew that i was wasted people told me that i shouldnt drive when id been drinking what in the world was i thinking? this was the price i had to pay to be here dead on the ground i lay my head was spinning, spinning wild here i am just a young child i didnt see those other cars the only thing i saw was a bunch of stars i was waiting for the pain to come because my whole body was feeling numb when the flashbacks of my life began i knew this was it,it was the end i hope this teaches a lesson here when you drink and drive i hope it causes you fear because drinking and driving is not healthy even if you are rich and wealhy

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March 5, 2009 05:45*Psychopathic Child*

I like this poem its very true and your right people should fear the drinking and the driving.

March 5, 2009 14:58Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

thank you

March 9, 2009 20:45CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

THIS IS THE FIRST PEOM I READ AND THAT IS WHY I AM HERE. YOU HAVE GREAT TALLENT, KEEP IT UP!!

March 16, 2009 13:59Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

thank you