I Told You

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By Invisible Poet

You asked me why we fought late last night i told you what i thought i dont care if we fight i told you i didnt care if you ever woke up from your sleep now its time to get up and your not there and my promise do i keep i dont care that your gone i told you i hated you you said this was done you said i wouldn't know what to do I told you, i wouldn't cry i told you, i wouldn't lie You laughed and went to bed never again to move your head. every one asks how i feel i say, i couldn't be better we made a deal if you died id write you a letter here you go hope you cry when you read it to but its time for you to go and you know your son, will not mourn you

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March 5, 2009 02:31*Psychopathic Child*

this very interesting poem I like the incite that you gave, so much passion I love great job. keep up the good work. P.S. i added to my freestyle poem made some modifications.

this is really great! thank you for your comments they really mean alot to me...

March 21, 2009 12:56CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

this is very good, it has feelings behind it, not sad or depressed but relieved. I cant really say sorry for that but i say it anyway.
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