L.I.F.E (my meaning)

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By CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART •

L- Low starndars, we get all get by, by doing nothing, other over achieve, the rest under. I- If? What If? Every one wonders other actually do. Pain? Death? Love? Sorrow? Forgiveness? Been-there-Done-that F- fucked up! All im gonna say E- Energetic? not me!! ITS BAD I KNOW!!!

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March 14, 2009 23:35Gutta Chic

This is a very good poem i feel as though i'm connected

March 15, 2009 01:12CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

uhhhhhh!! thanx

March 24, 2009 03:03Natural_beauty_Ashe

i dont think you should feel this way about life try to look for more positive things in life you know.

March 24, 2009 11:24CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

eah, i actually am about to make my positive version of life. lets just say i was not happy when i wrote this!!

March 24, 2009 20:43Natural_beauty_Ashe

well ill be waiting to read you positive outlook on life

May 19, 2009 17:52Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

this is a very good poem. great work.
i love it!!!

May 23, 2009 17:56Your Everlasting

This has some good meaning to it.Good job.Oh yeah sorry I made you cry.Thanks for the comments!

May 24, 2009 16:09CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

its ok u making me cry is a good thing, thats how great ur poem was!! THANX FOR THE COMMENT

July 10, 2009 00:57Nightlife

Hahaha love it! I like the little humor in this poem and the reality! Nice! Done and said.

September 2, 2009 18:35♥ Leah ☺

I can relate

April 1, 2010 05:37baya

hmmm mind if i try something like this?? this is very inspirational . . . I LOVE IT!!

April 2, 2010 03:44CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

Go ahead! :) good luck!