Does it Ever End?, by izzy
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Please remove,
your simple guise.
In other words,
remove your eyes.
I saw a mound,
a mound of lies.
It's memories like these,
from which I cry.
Come on now,
make your decision.
You cut me deep,
cut me right open.
Unfortunately,
without much precision.
I never said,
you could come in.
You took my heart,
and made it melt.
So poignant,
but so heartfelt...
Does it ever end? |
Posted: 2009-03-15 17:28:16 UTC |
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2009-04-14 16:29:31 | ... |
Ooooh I love it! Just beautiful... wow
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2009-04-29 18:13:39 | Gemma. |
Nice. |
2009-05-17 23:57:17 | Your Everlasting |
Written with beauty.Thanks for the comment!:) |
2009-05-28 12:38:45 | dispersed_sky |
you know how to xpress your feelings
goodluck |
2009-07-26 05:43:47 | Lily |
you have great talent |
2010-02-07 00:30:08 | Disruptive Silence |
this is so good! it has such meaning! you are an amazing writer |