Does it Ever End?

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By izzy

Please remove, your simple guise. In other words, remove your eyes. I saw a mound, a mound of lies. It's memories like these, from which I cry. Come on now, make your decision. You cut me deep, cut me right open. Unfortunately, without much precision. I never said, you could come in. You took my heart, and made it melt. So poignant, but so heartfelt... Does it ever end?

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March 25, 2009 21:21!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

beautifully written

April 8, 2009 20:20CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

this is wrtitten so powefully!!! very good

April 14, 2009 16:29...

Ooooh I love it! Just beautiful... wow

April 29, 2009 18:13Gemma.

Nice.

May 17, 2009 23:57Your Everlasting

Written with beauty.Thanks for the comment!:)

May 28, 2009 12:38dispersed_sky

you know how to xpress your feelings
goodluck

very well written. thanks for the comments. good luck.

July 26, 2009 05:43Lily

you have great talent

December 30, 2009 03:04Convalescence

I Love it.

February 7, 2010 00:30Disruptive Silence

this is so good! it has such meaning! you are an amazing writer