dont leave

By Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* • March 16, 2009 14:21 UTC

silent pain, muffled cries muted silence, pleaing tries shattered hearts, dried up tears whispered lies, crumbled fears i dont want you to leave even what you did i cant believe you apologized and thats enough i forgive you, for all that stuff just please dont leave, dont leave me we can work this out, soon, you'll just see i thought of it once, to take my life but you dont do the same...this cant be right you said you dont want me to hurt like those few and the world would be better without you your wrong, you know this isnt just some big show i couldnt possibly live here in a world that your not there so please dont leave, dont leave me because i wouldnt have love to give and love to receive

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March 16, 2009 19:53Invisible Poet

this poem is strikingly similar to the feelings i have right now... very good writing

March 17, 2009 14:06Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

thank you

March 18, 2009 09:11Invisible Poet

yah but i juts found out today that the girl ive been with for two years is dumping me for one of my freinds so i literally was feeling these things lol still good writing

March 18, 2009 14:06Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

thank you and im sad about that i just dumped my b-friend yesterday 3-17-09
hes a jerk but anyways

March 19, 2009 11:23CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

ohhhhh, sad!!!! i just also recnetly broke up with my bf- i honestly loved him but there was nothing between us. i asked him ife we could be friends and he said yeah so i guess i have some love to give and revieve!
good poem!!

sorry about your loose

March 19, 2009 14:06Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

its ok i think im better off without him so yeah...

April 14, 2009 21:28!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

NICELY PUT

April 20, 2009 14:00Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

thank you