dont leave, by Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
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silent pain, muffled cries
muted silence, pleaing tries
shattered hearts, dried up tears
whispered lies, crumbled fears
i dont want you to leave
even what you did i cant believe
you apologized and thats enough
i forgive you, for all that stuff
just please dont leave, dont leave me
we can work this out, soon, you'll just see
i thought of it once, to take my life
but you dont do the same...this cant be right
you said you dont want me to hurt like those few
and the world would be better without you
your wrong, you know
this isnt just some big show
i couldnt possibly live here
in a world that your not there
so please dont leave, dont leave me
because i wouldnt have love to give and love to receive |
| Posted: 2009-03-16 14:21:23 UTC |
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| 2009-03-16 19:53:38 | Invisible Poet |
| this poem is strikingly similar to the feelings i have right now... very good writing |
| 2009-03-18 09:11:39 | Invisible Poet |
| yah but i juts found out today that the girl ive been with for two years is dumping me for one of my freinds so i literally was feeling these things lol still good writing |
| 2009-03-18 14:06:30 | Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* |
| thank you and im sad about that i just dumped my b-friend yesterday 3-17-09
hes a jerk but anyways |
| 2009-03-19 11:23:46 | CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART |
| ohhhhh, sad!!!! i just also recnetly broke up with my bf- i honestly loved him but there was nothing between us. i asked him ife we could be friends and he said yeah so i guess i have some love to give and revieve!
good poem!!
sorry about your loose |