I am allright, by papaya Subscribe to rss feed for papaya

I have this feeling deep inside me...
I know I can handle things..
I should believe in myself...
I shouldn't let this thought torture me..
I am so much into all of these thigs..
I am allright
I am ok



( sorry about this piece of poem, I want to feel better. so,
I started writing, but I know this one is really bad.)
Posted: 2009-03-18 16:08:11 UTC

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2009-03-20 01:53:05izzy
i thought this wasn't bad at all. i think it's fantastic you write to express yourself. so do i.

2009-03-21 20:44:17papaya
Thanks, Smeckledwarf!! =)

2009-04-16 02:46:40!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
needs some work. but i really like its direction

2009-04-16 05:57:43papaya
Thanks, Chuck! why don't u help me fix this piece? I want to make it better. :)

2009-04-17 16:20:06!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
WELL I FEEL AS IF THIS IS TO FORCED OR LUCRATIVE ..... WHEN I KNOW YOUR SO MUCH MORE! WHEN I FEEL THIS WAY I HELP SOME ONE IN NEED THEN YOUR MORE THAN ALRIGHT YOUR SOMEONE SPECIAL MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN BEFORE. WORDS WITH ACTION SHINES WITH CONFIDENCE!!!!!! OH AND THIGS

2009-04-18 01:32:44papaya
Shine with confidence? What an encoraging phrase!! You're the best poet. =)

2009-04-18 17:58:04!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
NO NOT THE BEST. JUST TRYING TO SHINE!