By papaya •
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i thought this wasn't bad at all. i think it's fantastic you write to express yourself. so do i.
Thanks, Smeckledwarf!! =)
needs some work. but i really like its direction
Thanks, Chuck! why don't u help me fix this piece? I want to make it better. :)
WELL I FEEL AS IF THIS IS TO FORCED OR LUCRATIVE ..... WHEN I KNOW YOUR SO MUCH MORE! WHEN I FEEL THIS WAY I HELP SOME ONE IN NEED THEN YOUR MORE THAN ALRIGHT YOUR SOMEONE SPECIAL MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN BEFORE. WORDS WITH ACTION SHINES WITH CONFIDENCE!!!!!! OH AND THIGS
Shine with confidence? What an encoraging phrase!! You're the best poet. =)
NO NOT THE BEST. JUST TRYING TO SHINE!