shades of red, by AdiKOV
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as the moon came and went
so did your love
just like tides change
so did your heart.
now you are here with me
loving me like never
and tomorow you left
said goodbye forever
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| Posted: 2009-03-21 21:07:03 UTC |
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| 2009-03-22 01:57:09 | izzy |
| that must have been a hard time for you, but nontheless it was an emotional poem, and you did a good job on it. |
| 2009-03-22 20:52:49 | AdiKOV |
| thank you... it really has been a hard time. and this poem like all my poems was written in 1 minute. without any editing. simply writing my emotions. straight from my head. |
| 2009-04-21 19:15:22 | ... |
| I LOVE the natural imagery in the first stanza, it could have sounded really dull and old but it didn't!!! So Well Done! =D
You did a great job! |