shades of red
By AdiKOV •
as the moon came and went
so did your love
just like tides change
so did your heart.
now you are here with me
loving me like never
and tomorow you left
said goodbye forever
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March 22, 2009 01:57izzy
that must have been a hard time for you, but nontheless it was an emotional poem, and you did a good job on it.
March 22, 2009 05:15!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
NICE
March 22, 2009 20:52AdiKOV
thank you... it really has been a hard time. and this poem like all my poems was written in 1 minute. without any editing. simply writing my emotions. straight from my head.
April 21, 2009 19:15...
I LOVE the natural imagery in the first stanza, it could have sounded really dull and old but it didn't!!! So Well Done! =D
You did a great job!