THEY SAY THE FIRST TIME WONT EVER LAST

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By Natural_beauty_Ashe

they say the first time, wont ever last but that didnt stop me the first we laughed love bound we were at eyes first sight as your dark eyes glowed in the rays of sun light through my ups and downs you were there in the end when i was weak you were there to defend to young to know love thats what they all say but that doesnt stop us from living each day they say the first time, wont ever last but that didnt stop you the first time we laughed you know i love you and i know you love me together weve planned our life to be they might say the first time wont ever last but weve been together 1 year and 5 months and we're not letting one moment past

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March 28, 2009 05:03!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

vary good

March 28, 2009 06:35Natural_beauty_Ashe

thnk you

March 29, 2009 13:39CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

this is very good, i like hte emotion and the positive attitude, i hope it works out!!

March 29, 2009 18:06Natural_beauty_Ashe

well im hoping it will last too.thnks for ur comment