If Only

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By Jay Daniels

If only I were older, Or you were twice as young. Like grains of sand that wash away And ballads never sung. Like turning back And walking forth Into days of old. To sit and stare at firelight, With stories never told. To solve a riddle never asked And science never thought Is like a breeze Which does not blow Losing battles never fought.

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April 6, 2009 21:15izzy

this is really good! when u read it has a nice flow to it, almost like a song.

April 17, 2009 17:10!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

THIS IS REALLY WELL DONE!

April 21, 2009 19:16...

I love this, especially the first verse - BEAUTIFUL!!!! It just flows so well and it's just really really good!!!!

April 15, 2011 15:38(:

I actually really liked this. (: