i will never forget

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By feelingforgotten •

i will never forget the first day i saw you i will never forget the first note you wrote me or our first phone call i will never forget the first time we went out i will never forget the first time you lips touched mine i wont ever forget the first time i felt myself fall for you how could have you forgotten? why cant these things ever be true? how come it seems you dont care the way you say you do.. no matter how much it hurts no matter how much i cry i now know that i will never forget

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June 11, 2005 07:53FirePoet

A sad piece but I loved it!

September 18, 2005 19:39Finding Myself♥♥

sad, but touching. you are one that speeks for those to scaird to speak for theirselves

September 29, 2005 20:48Dy'mond (yup yup goon)

i diggs ya wordz, n like ya style, holla at cha gurl, n c if u like my flow

November 25, 2005 23:09little_irish_rose

truely amazing.... it is truely amazing how someone you don't even know can express how you feel in ways you never thought possible... that's what i wuz thinking while i was reading this poem.... there's so much in this that i can relate to.... you're writing is truely a work of art....

December 24, 2005 00:42opalescent.

simply bamboozling.

December 22, 2006 19:14Just Eat My Heart Out

i hate those dumb ace boys... they gotta ruin or lives...

December 23, 2006 02:04Princess

I LUV IT!

March 13, 2007 01:41User

Yeah...it speaks a lot of truth here..

March 20, 2007 17:07Angel of Music

Great poem! and very well written!

May 6, 2007 19:02gwen0193

That is a amazing piece good job!

June 22, 2007 23:12Shattered Mirror

boys can be very self centered yet you dont know how they dont see ure hurt i love your poem

August 10, 2007 04:34ForgottenWinterMemories

sad but really good. loved it. keep it up

November 15, 2007 13:07Beth aka Anonymous

Brilliant...I liked it a lot. I know how you feel.

December 27, 2007 05:56Anthony Cardon

T.T
Beautiful...

January 16, 2008 22:59wife2be

this is sad but i like it
somewhat of how i feel

March 21, 2009 23:06CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

this is sad!!! i thought it was going to be ahpp until i read the end!
its good though

April 26, 2009 04:06marsha

you made me remember, just what 'I will never forget' thank you,,,, great

March 13, 2010 13:04Broken_angel[

emotional but really good!

May 20, 2010 14:51Convalescence

I love this. It's beautiful, and I can empathize...